Bohandi stories (posted again)

Bohandi stories (posted again)

I have shared some of my stories before, but I received some complaints that people only find my posts and questions and requests, but no stories themselves. So, I decided to share it again. So, here are links to Soldiers of Earth, Bohandi backstory and Star Home: Bohandi:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C-od_b4yflL-eKf3mCeJS5khax0alV6V8Wpdb0SRWxs/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UzI3Cnr8pLTPOsMsh8_l1n0uMwXc0Wpq7p1chTf_TG0/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Sk28e7-VyrF-fxqEDhgyWBtTzBak6E0kQcEN7GxH70/edit?usp=sharing

I would like to ask you, if you read them, to review it, especially concerning the format and the content of the stories. Of events and characters. If you have any suggestions of future developments and/or opinions on relationships between characters and think how some are likely to develop, they are especially welcome.