Is this a cool idea

I’m looking get a tattoo done and have come up with my own design that I roughly drew out (I have no artists skills) before I take it to a professional for them to fix it up I was wondering if it the concept good or not please share your opinions!!! (I am thinking about taking out the hands)

I’m looking get a tattoo done and have come up with my own design that I roughly drew out (I have no artists skills) before I take it to a professional for them to fix it up I was wondering if it the concept good or not please share your opinions!!! (I am thinking about taking out the hands)