Need critique on a 1500 points list

Hey all,

I need some critique on this list as I’m not sure if this would work very well. I made this list to fight Orks and Imperial Guard.

++ Battalion Detachment -3CP (Chaos - Chaos Space Marines) [63 PL, 1,258pts, 7CP] ++

  • Configuration +

Battle Size [12CP]: 3. Strike Force (101-200 Total PL / 1001-2000 Points)

Detachment Command Cost [-3CP]

Legion: World Eaters

  • HQ +

Dark Apostle [4 PL, 80pts]: Illusory Supplication, Mark of Khorne, Soultearer Portent

Exalted Champion [5 PL, 95pts]: Bolt pistol, Mark of Khorne, Thunder hammer

  • Troops +

Khorne Berzerkers [5 PL, 109pts]: Icon of Wrath . Berzerker Champion: Astartes chainsword, Power fist . 4x Chainsword and Chainaxe: 4x Astartes chainsword, 4x Chainaxe, 4x Frag & Krak grenades

Khorne Berzerkers [5 PL, 100pts]: Icon of Wrath . Berzerker Champion: Astartes chainsword, Chainaxe . 4x Chainsword and Chainaxe: 4x Astartes chainsword, 4x Chainaxe, 4x Frag & Krak grenades

Khorne Berzerkers [5 PL, 99pts]: Icon of Wrath . Berzerker Champion: Astartes chainsword, Bolt pistol . 4x Chainsword and Chainaxe: 4x Astartes chainsword, 4x Chainaxe, 4x Frag & Krak grenades

  • Elites +

Terminators [8 PL, 170pts, -2CP]: Icon of Wrath, Mark of Khorne, Red Butchers . Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power fist . Terminator: Combi-bolter, Power maul . Terminator: Chainfist, Combi-bolter . Terminator Champion: 2x Lightning Claw . Terminator w/ Heavy Weapon: Power fist, Reaper autocannon

  • Fast Attack +

Raptors [5 PL, 100pts]: Mark of Khorne . 2x Raptor: 2x Astartes chainsword, 2x Bolt pistol, 2x Frag & Krak grenades . Raptor Champion: Astartes chainsword, Combi-melta . Raptor w/ special weapon: Flamer . Raptor w/ special weapon: Plasma gun

Raptors [5 PL, 100pts]: Mark of Khorne . 2x Raptor: 2x Astartes chainsword, 2x Bolt pistol, 2x Frag & Krak grenades . Raptor Champion: Astartes chainsword, Combi-plasma . Raptor w/ special weapon: Meltagun . Raptor w/ special weapon: Flamer

  • Heavy Support +

Havocs [7 PL, 145pts]: Mark of Khorne . Aspiring Champion: Astartes chainsword, Flamer . Havoc w/ autocannon: Autocannon . Havoc w/ heavy bolter: Heavy bolter . Havoc w/ lascannon: Lascannon . Havoc w/ reaper chaincannon: Reaper chaincannon

  • Dedicated Transport +

Chaos Rhino [4 PL, 80pts]: Mark of Khorne

Chaos Terrax-Pattern Termite [10 PL, 180pts]: Mark of Khorne . 2 Terrax heavy flamers

++ Auxiliary Support Detachment -2CP (Chaos - Daemons) [14 PL, 240pts, -3CP] ++

  • Configuration +

Chaos Allegiance: Khorne

Detachment Command Cost [-2CP]

Gametype

Use Beta Rules

  • HQ +

Bloodthirster of Unfettered Fury [14 PL, 240pts, -1CP]: Exalted Bloodthirster, G'rmakht the Destroyer, Warlord

++ Total: [77 PL, 4CP, 1,498pts] ++

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