Storyboards from chapter 4, advices appreciated

I try to avoid "talking heads syndrome", it's so hard to make dialogues look interesting...

I didn't post anything new in a long while so here's a small update. I keep working on my chapters, like said in bio I will prepare a whole volume of "Granted" first (7 chapters, around 240 pages), and all my finished pages made so far will be redrawn on my new device; I will simplify my style a bit. I think it will be published on MPC monthly but the whole volume will be available for reading on my Patreon already (symbolic 1$ paywall).

Currently I'm hoping to buy a new tablet next year 🥲